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   Arcadoof Star Wrangler

   Error this post was deleted by arcadoof

    

   Last edited: Oct 7, 2017

   Arcadoof, Oct 6, 2017

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   Hel ✨ Johto's Finest ✨ Forum Moderator

   

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   The story needs a LOT more detail. As a reader, we have no idea of the characters. The events I don't think were detailed enough and robbers breaking into a vet in the daytime to steal cats makes next to 0 sense whatsoever
   
   You have the base for a story. But you need a lot more than that

    

   Hel, Oct 7, 2017

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   Arcadoof Star Wrangler

   It's a rough draft I'm actually wanting to delete it
   
   I request that this thread be deleted, not closed, deleted.

    

   Arcadoof, Oct 7, 2017

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