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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by The Squid, Jul 13, 2015.
This is very well written, and flows like a dream. I feel like there's a lot of interesting things ahead, not only in the impending doom upon the town, but also behind that ornate door of yours...It's excellent, I'm already hooked!
Chapter two is here! I started writing chapter three, so it should be up in the next few days.
Oh crap! Those minikog are fast!
I love the way the weapons in his case are described. It makes it easy to imagine how elegant and sophisticated they must be. This is so suspenseful, but at the same time, it makes sense. Some crazy stuff has to go down to fit the beginning, but you had me hoping they would make it off anyway! I can't wait for chapter 3.
O•O...! I'm not sure how to predict the next chapter at all. Are the miniknog going to negotiate? Kill Roy right then and there? Suicide detonate the plasma grenade? GAH! This suspense is killing me! *dies from strangulation....*
Also, seventy light years in TWO DAYS?! Considering that isn't FTL is just absolutely insane! That's still FTL by about forty-five times!
Isn't that, like, 35 times the speed of light? :O
Right... Yeah... Its a bit early in the morning for me so I can't maths right nao...
That's alright dude! I've been up all night since 1pm yesterday. It's like...8:45am here.
But yeah, that's a fasssstttt ship. I want that modification for mine. I wouldn't even have to suffer the warp screen! Too bad he might not get to escape with that beauty of a ship.
I did the math, since space is my thing. That ship traveled 1280 times faster than light. That's 857,281,222,291 mph. That's 238,133,672 miles per second.
Unless I really messed up, these numbers should be very close.
Anyways, the story is awesome! I love it so far!
Oh, I must have calculated wrong. I used a shortcut by lightyears, but lol, I forgot a part of the equation. you've got it. lol
But hell yeah, the story is suspenseful as all get out now. I want MOAR.
Those numbers seem pretty accurate. Oops.
Anyway, I'm glad everyone likes the story!
Chapter three is almost done. Sorry for the delay, I've been really really busy this past week.[DOUBLEPOST=1437494375][/DOUBLEPOST]I decided to just sit down and write, and guess what? Chapter three happened!
What might happen next? I WANT TO KNOW IT!!!!
Man, I'm fast! Chapter four is already done! (Granted it's a little shorter than all of the other chapters). But I still deserve a pat on the back, right?
Oh this is great! I love it! I'm still just as excited for what comes next, but I'm so glad he made it!
Poor frog statue..
This is getting really intense
Chapter five! Yaaay! I think this is the longest chapter thus far.
Semi-good news! Chapter six will be out sometime tomorrow. I will not let this thread die!
Imagineing war-pictures and a man with deep voice saying:
We are at war
No one wants to admit it but humanity is under attack
One very specific man
might be all that stands between community
and the geatest threat of our breef existance
((A woman voice))
The haters are still out there
If we lose The Squid The community might follow
((A bit brighter man-voice))
We need a leader
and surrund him with the brigtest, the tuffest and deadliest community members
we can find
The team will have to be strong
they resolve unquestionable
((A ships warping sound))
((A huge explosion))
((A ship sinks down to a planet, burning))
((And finally The squid speaks))
We have to keep the story
even if that means our lives
We wont let this thread die!
We will fight for the lost
((And now the big title on the end of every trailer))
AFTER THE BOMBS DROPPED
With this music in background:
Chapter six is up, as promised!