Poem All I want for christmas...

Discussion in 'Winter Holiday Contest' started by Crazyon, Dec 28, 2012.

  1. Crazyon

    Crazyon Master Astronaut

    All I want for Christmas is a sweet, sweet game.
    If I love it ever so, perhaps i'll give it a name.
    I know for sure, that there is one game for me.
    It's been swimming through my dreams so free.
    It has a lovely name, and an amazing team.
    I hope this game is the best the world has ever seen.
    This game of course, that sounds so sweet.
    Will hopefully be fun to beat.
    The forum of this game is vast.
    But its come to grow on me rather fast.
    The staff here are so kind.
    This quality is hard to find.
    The community is quite swell.
    For I have come to love it well.
    This game of course, is known to many.
    And hopefully will cause joy for plenty.
    This game I describe in a loving sound.
    Is of course, Starbound.



    (Meh. Wanted to make a poem too :3 )
     
  2. Sham

    Sham Spoony Bard

    Another poem; I love it! The only thing I might suggest, if I may, is perhaps separation into stanzas. It isn't required, but it can provide emphasis and clarity.

    Great stuff! I am so happy that people are making poems.
     
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  3. Is the title mispelled?

    "AllI want for christmas"
     
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  4. Crazyon

    Crazyon Master Astronaut

    Well.
    Crap.
    Thank god this wasn't my true entry O_O
     
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  5. Just report a mod over ;)
     
  6. Ghostar

    Ghostar Steakeater

    Problem solved.
     
  7. Crazyon

    Crazyon Master Astronaut

    :rainbow:
    Gimme a hug!
     

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