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Discussion in 'Writing' started by Gilligan Lanley, Mar 14, 2016.
Agreed! Happy for the reboot!
btw The Official Avali Wiki's link to this goes to Diary of a lone Avali not this,
I didn't post the link to this one, just Diary of a Lone Avali. o:
Might as well keep the old one and add the new thread right after
Bit of an update on my hiatus:
Soooo, after plunging myself into the lovely MMO world I've decided that I spent maybe a bit too much time playing Final Fantasy 14: Heavensward. I will, however, be resuming writing and should have something new to post within the next few days! Sorry to keep everyone waiting ^.^;
FINALLY- oh wait I thought you would post an update :C
I can wait a few days anyway
Oh, and I can't blame you for playing Final Fantasy, I spent too many time on these to blame you in any way
Hows writing going?
A bit of a hiatus. Real life has me yanked away from the computer long periods of time so I haven't had much time for writing. :c
Don't worry take your time!
Eureka! I have been struck by the proverbial inspiration lightning and have begun rewriting the newest chapter!
PS: Nezun is uber adorable in this chapter me tinks.
So it's just going to be a new version of the prologue? No new chapter?
Don't worry, I'm not complaining! I'm glad you're doing something new, I just want to clarify this.
I had already started writing a new chapter, but lost my imaginative drive in the process. As such, I've begun rewriting the chapter; making a few changes here and there to what I already had written and continuing onward from what I had already wrote.
Me when i saw you in my alerts
It's done! Waiting to hear back from proofreaders, and it'll be up asap. Thanks again for all of your patience on the newest chapter!
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Aaaand chapter 1 is up! Hope you guys enjoy it! ^.^
That was an awesome chapter, I'm waiting to se more ^o^
Coming back to this thread and seeing all my comments actually made me cringe.
Any how, the new chapter is interesting.
I have a couple of gripes, Nezuns is not human is she, Doesn't her race dislike humans, Why is she using human swears?
AND WHY DOES SHE HAVE BRITISH ACCENT?!
Nezun is not a human. Avali don't hate humans; to my knowledge, and she's using human swear 'cause I can't think of something creative to use for swear words for Avali at the moment. Will change if I do.
As well, about the English accent; I DIDN'T THINK OF IT... MUST REWORK THE WHOLE THING AGAIN FOR BRITISH BABES!
Wasn't being serious about Nezuns being a human.
I never said hate, I said dislike. The lore I read is from the Creator. So I would know.
I have a feeling Nezun had some human encounters.
But it's somewhat of a plot hole until more information is given.
Plot holes are meant to be filled. How soon is the question. c: