Yeah, it would probably be more beneficial if you did it bit-by-bit. Like you said, people could give you feedback more quickly; it would also probably be easier for you as well, since you wouldn't have to deliver it all at once in one big package.
well shit I'm easy to convince. gunna read through it one more time, then put it up. two parts, and one of them is a rewrite of the Character Origin.
the only question that remains is whether or not I should open up the 'Story-Segments' under a new thread... and if so, where? If I did, I'd be able to lose the annoying as Poppins double-triple spoilers that haunt this Original Post and everything I try to tie onto it.
then bump the other thread. it has bells and stuff. either way, it's nearly midnight and your insisting on holding a conversation in the middle of a nearly dead thread. ... do you know how much trouble we'll be in if we're caught here? none at all, that's besides the point.
but there are already robots in Starbound now. I'm just a poser and I'm too much of a human being to be hipster about the Starbound Robots idea.
http://i.imgur.com/84QKV.png as seen in http://community.playstarbound.com/...nced-game-information.450/page-93#post-391442