Story Protectorate Rising: A Starbound Story (Updated 21/04/20)

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  1. Internal Screaming

    Internal Screaming Space Spelunker

    i don't read fanficton very often but i can tell yours is very well written and is great so far.:nurunaughty:
     
    Internal Screaming, Jan 3, 2018
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  2. Speed Lightning

    Speed Lightning Phantasmal Quasar

    This is very well-written. I look forward to seeing future chapters.

    Although the in-game cutscenes indicate that those who are defeated are restored at their ship in the vanilla lore, I prefer the idea of emergency teleporting because it can much more easily explain how one is returned to their ship with their consciousness - or what some may argue to be their soul - after being defeated. Considering that the ship would need to very accurately detect fatal hazards - which SAIL would likely be able to do - and very quickly teleport the user away, my hypothesis is that emergency teleports would also use a much larger amount of energy than standard forms of teleportation.
     
    Speed Lightning, Jan 26, 2018
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  3. Jonesy

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    Chapter 12 is up!
     
    Jonesy, Feb 4, 2018
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  4. ChronoHyperion

    ChronoHyperion Big Damn Hero

    I hope this General Kate is not like those clique Generals in movies.
     
    ChronoHyperion, Apr 17, 2018
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  5. DinoExplorer2000

    DinoExplorer2000 Cosmic Narwhal

    I want to read more about this story! i love it! a great idea to let more than one protector on one ship. i wish you Luck writing the rest of this story, and plz hurry!
     
    DinoExplorer2000, May 26, 2018
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  6. Jonesy

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    I'm afraid this story has fallen by the wayside a bit, what with university and my H&L rewrite. But I do intend to continue it, and I'll likely find the time to keep working on it soon now that the university semester's winding down.
     
    Jonesy, May 27, 2018
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  7. DinoExplorer2000

    DinoExplorer2000 Cosmic Narwhal

    i can wait, but i have to say, this story is great! i hope i can make my story somewhat as good.
     
    DinoExplorer2000, May 27, 2018
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  8. Jonesy

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    Chapter 13 is up! Sorry it's been a while. As I've said, my writing focus has been on Human & Lupusad for much of the year. But I'll still try to find the time to continue this story.
     
    Jonesy, Aug 8, 2018
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  9. DinoExplorer2000

    DinoExplorer2000 Cosmic Narwhal

    Nice!
     
    DinoExplorer2000, Aug 8, 2018
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  10. Jonesy

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    I know it's been a long time between chapters, but chapter 14 is up!

    As I've said before, I've been largely busy with H&L. I'm currently angling to have the reboot / novelization finished by the end of the year. This is also the final year of my writing degree, and I'll be undertaking several major projects. Still, I have no intention of dropping Protectorate Rising, even though it's unfortunately going to be a secondary project for the foreseeable future. But I'll keep at it.
     
    Jonesy, Feb 21, 2019
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  11. DinoExplorer2000

    DinoExplorer2000 Cosmic Narwhal

    hooray! youre not giving up this story! i was a little worried
     
    DinoExplorer2000, Feb 21, 2019
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  12. mechaghost2003

    mechaghost2003 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    awesome can't wait to read it
     
    mechaghost2003, Mar 4, 2019
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  13. Jonesy

    Jonesy Sarif's Attack Kangaroo Forum Moderator

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    Hi everyone. I know I kinda let this fic fall by the wayside, and for that I apologize. I'm aiming to become a writer professionally, so most of my writing time now goes towards projects that will facilitate that. However, between graduating university and finding myself in the middle of a pandemic, I've now got plenty of time on my hands. With the amount of time I now spend writing, I've decided to try and dedicate some more towards continuing Protectorate Rising. As such, there'll be a new chapter sometime in the coming week or so, and hopefully many more to follow.

    Edit: Chapter 15 is up!
     
    Last edited: Apr 21, 2020
    Jonesy, Apr 13, 2020
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  14. Jonesy

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    Chapter 16 is up!
     
    Jonesy, Jun 12, 2020
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  15. Cptn_Stuart

    Cptn_Stuart Orbital Explorer

    GET THIS PUBLISHED!!
    I love it. But could you add a character called Markhoff? That's my avian character
     
    Cptn_Stuart, Nov 26, 2021
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  16. Cptn_Stuart

    Cptn_Stuart Orbital Explorer

    GET THIS PUBLISHED!!
    I love it. But could you add a character called Markhoff? That's my avian character
     
    Cptn_Stuart, Nov 26, 2021
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