Risk of Rain fan-fiction- trying to put a story to the enigmatic game

Well, this forum area hasn't seen some love in a while, so who knows who'll see this. But it never hurts to throw it to the wind.

I've decided to start working on a fan-fiction piece for Risk of Rain. The story is so incredibly enigmatic that it presents a compelling piece to write about; lots of freedom to work with, while at the same time having specific, guiding parameters. I'm trying to stay true to Risk of Rain's core; that is, brutal and a certain kind of cruel, with a sizable cast of characters on an alien planet.

Not sure how to work in the items in any logical manner... we'll see

Here's where I'm currently at. For all intents and purposes, this is a preview. It is subject to change in its entirety!

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B5HZJIvop7_OWS1hc0JCRXh1OGs

 

I didn't read all of it, but from what I did read, it's quite well written! I actually really like the idea of putting more of a story into the game.

 

This is really good! I don't think I've ever even seen Ror fanfic before, but this is impressive.

 

Honestly amazing! I've been looking for something like this since I first read the monster logs. Looking forward to further chapters!