Poem The Avian's Battle Prayers

Here's a collection of Poems I thought the Avians would pray before battle:

Great Bird
I humbly ask for your mighty wing
To hold my fragile life in safety
May the enemies before me taste your smite
And the fire not hurt your children
Let the shackles of death drag upon the ones below your grace
Let it be so
Let it be so

Your omnipotence is my shield
Wrath my spear
A power of yours is embers among wood
Arrows among sticks
Swords among clubs
The apes may come with their metal spears of fire
But we have your fire within us
And your power in our spears

 

Good news! This is now a collection and no longer one poem!

 

They're pretty good! My only criticism is a grammatical one; in Embers Among Wood, the line "A power of yours is embers among wood" should be "A power of yours 'are' embers among wood" since embers is a plural.

 

But "A power" is singular and you can make a plural analogy out of a singular.