Thank ya kindly, sir. I already know what I'm gonna do for my next drawing, too. I'm planning on drawing a request, and then a backwater drawing, and then request etc etc. I'll start with drawing subjects from the video, and then I'll attempt drawing other things in the backwater style. I LOVE creepy/dark/macabre topics so so much.
Still looks good to me. In my opinion, getting the actual style of art more accurate than the proportion is better, cause then I could make anything in that style! You've got the style on lock!