Story The Chronicles of Bustow

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by The Squid, Nov 23, 2014.

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How do you feel about this whole thing?

  1. It's intoxicating

    2 vote(s)
    13.3%
  2. It's pretty darn good

    12 vote(s)
    80.0%
  3. Meh

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  4. I don't know what this is

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. собака

    1 vote(s)
    6.7%
  6. This sucks

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  7. I curse thee and all thy descendants, for thou hast committed an unspeakable crime

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  1. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    don' die
     
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  2. Yzzey

    Yzzey Heliosphere

    Pretty much exactly what happened the first time I fought dreadwing.
     
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  3. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entry #27 is out! Enjoy!
     
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  4. Divoratore

    Divoratore Void-Bound Voyager

    Floran really likes that story,also floran thinks human is bad.Floran smells familiar thing,but They have mutated it.On a side note,does the poop monster really exist?
     
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  5. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    I'm glad you like it! And yeah, the poop guy actually exists. It's called a "Po Golem."
     
  6. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entry #28 is here![DOUBLEPOST=1418594096][/DOUBLEPOST]Entry #29 is out too!
     
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  7. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entries #30 and 31 are ready! Yaaaaay!:DD
     
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  8. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entry #32 is out! Sorry I haven't updated this in a few days, I'll try and get another entry out tomorrow!
     
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  9. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Hello everybody! Sorry about the lack of updates recently. School and the holidays kinda got in the way. I have a question. I've been toying with the idea of Chriswell either a) gloriously assassinating Dreadwing or b) having Chriswell be wounded and/or killed. I'm leaning towards option a, however while I don't usually like killing off main characters, I do think a plot twist would be cool. Anyway, what do you guys think? Should I spare Chriswell, or should I lead him to a horrible, gruesome demise?
     
  10. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    my vote is both.
    successful suicide mission o3o
     
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  11. Divoratore

    Divoratore Void-Bound Voyager

    Im with rhomboid:Chriswell killing Dreadwing but getting hurt really bad would make the most sense.Well,after dreadwing exiting the UFO and destroying the galaxy,but that a bit too much.
     
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  12. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    I have returned with a (slightly) lengthier entry! I give you... ENTRY #33! Enjoy!
     
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  13. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Sorry it's been almost a week since I updated last. But today, I have two entries*, so you can pretend one came out on Wednesday! Yaaaaaay!


    *Entries #34 and #35
     
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  14. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entry #36 is out already? It's a miracle!
     
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  15. Divoratore

    Divoratore Void-Bound Voyager

    Feast?Floran knows well how to feast in ship,but usually does not like big monkey.The meat is hairy.
     
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  16. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entry #37 is here! It's got... uh... cooked Hylotls and banana bacon... and that's about it. Anyway, enjoy!
     
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  17. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Wow... it's been a really really really really long time. Anyway, Entries 37 and 38 are done. I'll try to get these out more frequently.
     
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  18. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Entries 40-42 are here. Sorry that the updates are becoming less frequent, it's been pretty busy lately.
     
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  19. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Woohoo! After more than a month, entries #43 and #44 are out!
     
  20. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    I must say, after checking this out today, I am enjoying this quite a bit. The entries are descriptive and have good detail and make enough sense to figure things out. A few minor points I have to nit-pick is the major lack of images and the pacing. You seem to be going everywhere an its a bit hard to follow, one moment you're in some sewers, the next you're drinking with a human in a bunker. Here's a little suggestion, maybe you could add some dates and times to keep things a bit easier to follow. Also, would you mind easing it with the curses? I know some explicit language is appropriate in some situations, but you're a bloody apex man! Have some nobility! Pull yourself together, and "DON'T PANIC". Keep up the good work! I'm loving this so far.
     
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