----------------------------I They are basically snails,but more human like... I---------------------------- ~!WARNING!~ ~!I'M TOTALY UNTALENTED FOR WRITTING STORY!~ ~!YOU'RE READING THIS AT YOUR OWN RISK!~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~! BIOLOGY / HISTORY!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ From the beginning of their existence were plasma snails...they been living peacefully on planet that just started her life but conquerors invaded their planet and destroyed everything by extracting resources...some of the frist primitive xians survived and due high level of radiation from mines and places where invaders extracted resources mutated and survived... ...millenniums later... Xians have drastically changed and improved in every way...with technology and knowledge left from invaders they build their own technology line and culture...but they did not forget from which they began and what had happened ... their neuro system evolved so much that they can share and leave they memories to next generations so that they can improve and protect themself..They have a lot of knowledge that universe don't know that it exist and they shared it with other races but the only used it for destruction instead for own improvement...after incident that almost costed them a milion lives they disappeared... They now live on radioactive frozen planets where no other race can land or survive... "What happened once,may happen again... we wont interfere... we'll only... watch... " Elder Sfux(432 f.t. years) / f.t-frozen star ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~! TECHNOLOGY !~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So let me know what you think about this...^^ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm more better in art then other things if someone wants to help me with story and things like that let me know...^^
Nice art... really, I wish I could do something like that for my own race. It would be cool to have some background information about the Xians! Like history, society, relationship with other species...
Ty^^ Yeah i'll think about it...but for now i would like to see what people think about this race so that i can continue with background...
Odd concept. Nice art, but a bit unfleshed lore and mechanics wise... Would you mind filling in some of the details? The suggestions guide for making a race idea is a good place to start. But as I said, interesting idea. I would like to see how it turns out!
they need abetter name, and lore. xi'ian is in star citizen, and is too distinctive for the removal of the 'I to change that.
Very nice idea, I like it. You should totally go back and try to add more to their backstory though. Maybe a little something on their culture would be nice.
I absolutely agree. At least let somebody help you write their backstory so they can turn into a fulfilled idea. ya should have expected us to be interested if you posted this here
"Too distinctive." Not really to be honest. If anything Star Citizen should have probably tried to make a better name for whatever their xi'ian is, considering xi'an is a city in China.[DOUBLEPOST=1439646045][/DOUBLEPOST] But I can see why you'd suggest a more distinctive name, so I can somewhat agree if the OP wants to have something that leads to this race rather than something else on a Google search.
If someone wants to help me with story and things like that let me know...^^ I'll try to get back with some technology arts... Still don't have idea for new name... ._.
Ideally a new name would be a play off of what they are or something they represent. For example, my race is called Staterans, which can be roughly translated from Latin to "the balance." So, perhaps this race could be named by some major aspect of their culture. Snalugs comes to mind (a mash up of snails and slugs). you could also reference their apparent preference for isolation. One example would be Solus, which is Latin for alone or only.
