Story: To the Valley (Happy New Year: Chapter 30!)

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by Alkanthe, Jun 20, 2016.

  1. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    I wrote this as a "quick" chapter, not focusing too much on the details and just writing what came to me. Despite getting distracted a bit, I finished chapter 22!
     
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    • Risukage

      Risukage Giant Laser Beams

      So Reb is a finesse fighter; small, fast, and nimble. Time to wreck some fools!
       
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      • 611

        611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

        What already!

        *starts reading*

        Yeeeees
         
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        • Alkanthe

          Alkanthe Supernova

          Guess what?
           
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          • Risukage

            Risukage Giant Laser Beams

            Time to create a separate save to load from, just in case, yeah? :p

            Also, slimes, ewwwwww. Hope they've got a spare pair of trousers back home, these are SO going to be ruined...
             
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            • Alkanthe

              Alkanthe Supernova

              Here's a couple of old pictures (from my SDV art thread) that I edited to capture the atmosphere of the end of this chapter.
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              • MarianT

                MarianT Subatomic Cosmonaut

                I just started reading this, enjoyed the first 5 chapters. So Reb is thrilled when Demetrius says the valley is magical because of its plants? That's only the beginning!
                 
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                • Alkanthe

                  Alkanthe Supernova

                  Indeed it is!
                   
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                  • Alkanthe

                    Alkanthe Supernova

                    Here's part one of a Christmas surprise: Chapter 24!
                     
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                    • 611

                      611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

                      Woohoo!
                       
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                      • Risukage

                        Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                        What the hell, Marlon, kill-stealing like that. Not cool, she's the one who needs the XP. :-/
                         
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                        • 611

                          611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

                          He killed my new favorite character...
                           
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                          • Alkanthe

                            Alkanthe Supernova

                            Not a new chapter update (yet), but can I just say I've been planning future character arcs and backstory and holy crap it's so complex. Like Sinisterra levels of complexity.

                            Some things to look out for in future:
                            - Jodin, Ryan, and Summer's arrival. Jodin and Ryan are brother and sister, but probably won't arrive together. Summer will arrive with Kent.
                            - The bad guys are not who you think.
                            - Reb's visit to the Calico Desert, I don't know when that'll happen, but it won't end well.
                            - There will be more death.
                            - Some characters that are rarely paired will be paired, and some common ships will not work in this universe.
                            - Love won't be simple or straightforward.

                            All of this is subject to change as I work through the story, but these are some of my plans currently.
                             
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                            • Risukage

                              Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                              Yasss, world-building and rarepairs FTW! Looking forward to seeing what you come up with. :)
                               
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                              • Alkanthe

                                Alkanthe Supernova

                                And Chapter 25 is here! Featuring distractions.

                                I'll try to get to Chapter 30 before the new year.
                                 
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                                • Risukage

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                                  Maybe if they do a bit more adventuring in the mines Marlon and Gil can afford to have Robin do an upgrade. But since they've been bachelors this long it's likely that they wouldn't know what to do with a proper kitchen anyway. :p
                                   
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                                  • Alkanthe

                                    Alkanthe Supernova

                                    Still haven't told you what they do for a living (it's not adventuring in the mines, that's not their main paying job.)
                                     
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                                    • Alkanthe

                                      Alkanthe Supernova

                                      Chapter 26 is here! Doesn't feel as strong as the previous, but at least worldbuilding and some things are happening.
                                       
                                      • Risukage

                                        Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                                        Reb is a good kid, here's hoping that they can retain that optimism and kindness. And well then, yeah, it looks like the Adventurer's Guild is good to go for cash. They DO have trees up there, I keep forgetting. :D
                                         
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                                        • Alkanthe

                                          Alkanthe Supernova

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