Story: To the Valley (Happy New Year: Chapter 30!)

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by Alkanthe, Jun 20, 2016.

  1. Risukage

    Risukage Giant Laser Beams

    How sensible! A lot of bad things can be avoided if people just sit down and talk things out like adults. *Nods sagely.*

    Unless, of course, they're just out to cause mayhem and stuff, in which case, GET REKT M8.
     
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    • Alkanthe

      Alkanthe Supernova

      Chapter 28! A little short, but important stuff.
       
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      • 611

        611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

        Experience has taught me not to trust people who have Chryso at the beginnings of their names. You better not trust this crabberoo, Reb.
         
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        • Zebe

          Zebe Space Kumquat

          Gemcrab, Marlon and Brandon have all told their stories but feels a lot like the whole truth isn't out yet. Rebbb you aren't going to believe it all just because few minerals are you?
          chrysoberyls look neat tho
           
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          • Risukage

            Risukage Giant Laser Beams

            Seeker? Hmm! Well, there's no Golden Snitch here, but they did still find a nifty prize: allies. Now to see how it pans out for everyone. Don't be a stodgy old fart about this, Marlon! :p
             
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            • Alkanthe

              Alkanthe Supernova

              Chapter 29. Don't complain about the laziness. I need help. I am being threatened with limits on the time I can spend working on stuff like this. I'm losing my steam here. I'm trying to do this for you guys before I run out of time.
               
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              • Zebe

                Zebe Space Kumquat

                Ain't complaining. This chapter had a few surprises. Reb running, Brandon, Lachlans... and a promise of the Full Storyâ„¢. Good stuff altogether.
                 
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                • Risukage

                  Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                  Hunh, the title of that book sounds strangely familiar... ;P

                  Well, story time! BRB, off to get some hot cocoa and a comfy chair.
                   
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                  • Alkanthe

                    Alkanthe Supernova

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                  • Risukage

                    Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                    I have only one comment today:

                    D'awwwwwww. :D
                     
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                    • Zebe

                      Zebe Space Kumquat

                      Marlon, Gil, oh you two. :DD I swear, I did suspect that earlier. Ah, gloriously confirmed.
                       
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                      • 611

                        611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

                        I

                        I just.

                        *starts crying*

                        So happy.
                         
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                        • Alkanthe

                          Alkanthe Supernova

                          Sorry, no new chapter yet... but does anyone remember when I posted this?

                          Well, it's happening now. But only if I get enough players. Like this post, here to let me know if you want to play. This is a good reference for the type of game I host.
                           
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                          • Alkanthe

                            Alkanthe Supernova

                            Um, so...

                            This is coming back.

                            Over the summer, yep.

                            I've condensed the previous chapters into nine sections, so far; not sure if that's proper but I'll fix it up and give you a nice link to them tomorrow. (Or, later today.)

                            Get ready for a wild ride.
                             
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                            • Ghostly Fox

                              Ghostly Fox Heliosphere

                              Welcome back! It'll be interesting to see how you do the condensing, because three chapters into one sounds pretty intense.
                               
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                              • Alkanthe

                                Alkanthe Supernova

                                It kinda is, but for one: most of my "chapters" are really short. Also, at least in the early chapters, three chapters covered an entire day, and... that was pretty consistent for at LEAST twelve chapters.

                                It's taking so long because I have to reformat everything, including the character profiles. Good news is, I know what direction this story is gonna go.

                                It's not gonna be pretty. It's not gonna be normal. It's gonna cover pretty hard topics, and it'll be a lot like my life, which I guess is kinda the point of Reb being a self insert.

                                I don't even know if Reb is gonna get the girl. I sure haven't.
                                 
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